For: Seven By Seven Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
April 8, 2026
You stay here, you're gonna die. Not all at once, but little by little. Eventually, you'll become as hollow as I am.* Wished upon a falling star, tried to catch the rainbow’s end, bought all kinds of lucky charms, but love always passed me by outside the place where I dwell in perpetual dreaming under a torn paper moon. * Vic Fontaine (James Darren), “It’s Only a Paper Moon, Star Trek: Deep Space Nine S07 E10, 1998
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