Paper Lanterns

Paper Lanterns

                                                  Light
                                                Throws out
                                               Amber kiss
                                              To the twilight
                                           From paper lanterns
                                            Strung on branches
                                                Like glowing
                                                   Paper 
                                                  Moons

7-2-21
Contest: Ninette
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

Contest: Say It in Nine
Sponsor: Joseph May
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August 23, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Sam, you have created such a wonderful ninette, and it depicts twilight in a way that is absolutely breathtaking. Congratulations on your well-earned win and thank you for visiting my page and leaving a comment.
Alex Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 4:40 AM
"Like glowing Paper Moons" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Hi Chris! Thank you so much. Amber lanterns on a warm summer night are like holding onto amber moons just for my delight! Sending you many blessings of warm summer nights beneath a full amber moon!
Buehler Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 11:39 AM
Such a beautiful vision of twilight is portrayed in your wonderful ninette, Sam. Congratulations on your win, my friend.
Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 12:47 PM
Greetings Evelyn! I just love the look of amber paper lanterns on a warm summer night. So glad you enjoyed this wonderful sight. Many thanks for your congratulations! I always love your delightful, thoughtful, messages - a gift like the vision of paper lanterns on a summer's eve. Sending you summer blessings my friend!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 8:15 AM
The beautiful imagery in your Ninette is exceptionally glorious Sam. I love this! Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Kauffman Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 9:27 AM
Greetings Connie! I am so glad you liked this Ninette - just made my day my friend! I am honored that this made the winners list with so many wonderful poems. It was a fun contest. I enjoy this poetic form - a lot in a little. And paper lanterns strung from trees always means a party or celebration! That makes me happy. All the best. Sending you blessings on wings of celebration!
Gasun Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Wow! So lovely my dear friend Sam! Light throwing amber kiss.. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. Hugs
Kauffman Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Hi Len! Thank you so much! For me there is an intrinsic charm about paper lanterns - happiness on a string! Take care! Sending you blessings dear friend!
May Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 6:29 AM
Your words are woven beautifully in this write Sam, Congrats on your win
Kauffman Avatar
August 19, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Thank you so much Joseph! I love the look of paper lanterns on a summer's night - warm and inviting as people gather beneath their glow. I am deeply appreciate of your placement and the opportunity to re-share this Ninette! Blessings!
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Coming back to congratulate you on your win.
Messina Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Lovely ninette, Sam. Best wishes in the contest. Hope all is well. Charlie
Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Charlie! I have always loved the festive light of paper lanterns in a summer twilight. Was such fun to create a shape to match the theme of the poem. All is well. Hope you are doing well. So wonderful to have you back in the soup! Blessings my friend.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 4:08 AM
Lovely picture you portray here. Superb
Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 8:50 AM
Thank you so much Rama! Just a little snapshot of twilight in celebration! Take care friend.
Brul Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 4:02 AM
so delightful dear Sam! i love it! A fave!!
Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 8:48 AM
I am honored by your fav JCB! Thank you! It brings me much happiness like the amber light of a paper lantern on a summer night. Blessings to you my friend!
Legros Kelley Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Very serene, love this!
Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much BJ! Have always loved the way paper lanterns glow in the darkness! Blessings!
Allison Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 1:31 PM
absolutely charming Sam:-) hugs Jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Hi Jan! Much gratitude and many thanks. This was fun! Paper lanterns are so festive. hugs
Alex Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 11:25 AM
Nice Paper Lanterns.
Kauffman Avatar
July 7, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Thank you Chris! Was fun to work with the shape and the concept! Blessings!
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