Paper Boat

Every life tells a story Who writes the one? Did I say I am a writer? Do I write words, just Words? I write on paper Make o boat of write The boat sets off in a pail I smile at my life And then I laugh at me Is that life? What an absurd comparison of A rope with a snake Where is life? Where is breath? Where is movement? Where is it In a pail??? Or out in the ocean

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/9/2014 3:46:00 PM

A beautiful powerful write, Neetu - no wonder it is on the winners' list! Congratulations!

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 6/13/2014 8:14:00 AM

Beautiful and original!

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/13/2014 11:03:00 AM

thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2014 3:47:00 PM

Neetu, CONGRATULATIONS.... You sure slammed the slam.... Hugs... LINDA

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/10/2014 11:10:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/10/2014 12:42:00 AM

Neetu, congratulations on a fine win. Mohan

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/10/2014 1:47:00 AM

thak you so much

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 6/9/2014 8:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win and thanks for supporting my slamming contest… Verlena

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/10/2014 1:48:00 AM

thank you so much

Daver Austin

Date: 6/9/2014 3:06:00 PM

Please don't thank me. Read some of my stuff. daver

Daver Austin

Date: 6/9/2014 3:04:00 PM

A paper boat meant for communication. Why we write. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 10:32:00 AM

you are welcome

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 7:42:00 AM

Neetu,, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/9/2014 10:30:00 AM

THANK YOU

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2014 6:53:00 AM

A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Neetu

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/9/2014 10:30:00 AM

THANK YOU

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2014 11:50:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Neetu :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/8/2014 10:48:00 PM

thank you so much

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 9:07:00 AM

NEETU, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 6/7/2014 9:04:00 AM

Neetu,, love the opportunity to live within a story, that breathes and sails away with the comparisons of the ocean, ,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/7/2014 10:22:00 AM

Hi! I am Neetu. Who am I? This question is very difficult to answer. Well! If you insist, let me reveal. I am a human and like every other human I eat, sleep, drink, dance, sing, laugh, smile, cry and so on. Hang on! There is a difference. Unlike most of the human beings, I breathe and when I breathe, I relax. When I am relaxed, I draw. I draw sketches of me in words. I have been orbiting around sun for forty years now. I started this journey on the Valentine day of 1974.

Diane Christian

Date: 6/7/2014 5:03:00 AM

good write

Neetu Wali
Date: 6/7/2014 5:11:00 AM

thanks a lot

Diane Christian

Date: 6/7/2014 5:02:00 AM

lovely poem

Diane Christian

Date: 6/7/2014 5:01:00 AM

welcome to poetry soup good write