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Paper Bag Head

Paper Bag Head Like musical notes my voice dissipates in the air Was I even there? Why can't I remember where? The roots of my square... Affirmations missed, the nobody list Does anyone care? Is anyone out there? Life's not fair... The want to be needed, yet defeated Why am I me? What is happening? The Ugly Duckling... bmdavey@05/04/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2016 7:42:00 PM

Brian, there is something about this. I REALLY like it. WAs it inspired by the invisible contest? Gotta fave it!

Brian Davey
Date: 5/6/2016 8:30:00 PM

I am so happy to get another one of my writes on your fav list! No it was not inspired by the invisible contest although now I wish I had entered it in it! Oh well maybe next time!

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 11:47:00 PM

fun read Brian

Brian Davey
Date: 5/6/2016 1:14:00 AM

thanks Skat