Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Paper Airplains To You

Thoughts spill on paper wings....
Comes to life in a poetic ring...

A paper airplane written just for you...
Words from a heart that fell in two..

They fly across your distant sky...
Reaching eyes while they whisper by...

A paper airplane that has to fly...
Sprinkled with hugs and care for 
a love gone by...

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Yanny Widjanarko November 18, 2012 at 5:42 PM I really got the picture of this paper airplane, this is so smooth like was flying upon the skies and passing through the marshmallow clouds, romantic but slightly gives some yearning point. Simple couplet with the huge and deep impression - Hug, Yanny

Elizabeth Wesley August 22, 2012 at 7:19 PM What a sweet way to send yoour message, romantic and creative to captivate the girl of your dreams!

Poet Destroyer A August 22, 2012 at 6:21 PM Michael, your words are like magic. very adorable on this poem. A flight of words into the heart..xox~pd

Sukmawati Komala August 22, 2012 at 8:37 AM I lov your write ...Thanks Michael :) SK

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 21, 2012 at 9:24 PM oh so tender UI can feel the emotion so clearly Michael luv..simply put but powerfully stated.. past loves have a way of hanging on like your paper airplanes.. remember making them aws a child? JG does.. xoxo

Joann Grisetti August 20, 2012 at 1:14 PM Glad to see you here today. Nice poetic symbolism.

Harry Horsman August 20, 2012 at 10:16 AM sincerity across the miles i read here, Michael. awesome message.

Cory Long August 19, 2012 at 8:44 AM No TPS took it down... Thanks for letting me tell my story TPS. Glad to know that 3 days was enough time to let others speak up..

David Williams August 19, 2012 at 7:02 AM did you remove your blog?

Kash Poet August 19, 2012 at 6:51 AM Beautiful roamantic poem here Michael.Enjoyed the read.

David Williams August 19, 2012 at 5:18 AM Michael excellent write,...Dave

Cory Long August 18, 2012 at 11:09 PM this was really well penned nice job! cory

Joy Wellington August 18, 2012 at 8:20 PM MJ, this is a lovely play of words with such sweet connotations. Thanks for reading my "Bright Hungry Belly" which is a work based upon facts...One love. Joy Wells

Delysia Hendricks August 18, 2012 at 7:27 PM Awww, Michael. I sure hope this is a work of fiction. If not, keep sending those thoughts on paper wings. Chin up. :)

Russell Sivey August 18, 2012 at 6:24 PM This is a wondrous poem my friend! I really enjoyed your creativity within this special write! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!