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Panther Purr

Temptress myrrh, lips cherry liqueur, slinky stir, pulsing panther purr, femme fatale’s flirt dangerous tease, wild-cat style pounce you to your knees! Sinuous, sensual gyrate, animal allure consummate, delicious grin, deadly as sin, inside-out she will spin your skin. Prowling, growling and soft meow, feline finesse, enchantress know-how... tie you in knots, lie you a mess, panther purr in little black dress. Susan Ashley August 3, 2017

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 3/24/2018 1:59:00 AM

Oooh, so smooth throughout! Love it! Being the cat lover that I am, the title prowled and captured me...your words, more so! Well done! Always, Laura

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/24/2018 2:25:00 PM

I am so happy that the title captured your attention, Laura, and even more delighted that you enjoyed my poem. Your wonderful comments are like music to my ears.. Thank you, my friend! Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/11/2017 5:54:00 PM

Like you know the feline panters...Just as deadly as any in the Jungle of South America... A good one...Good night Susan... I'm wasted to sleep...

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/11/2017 8:26:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit dear Arturo. I appreciate your wonderful presence and your kind comments on my poetry page. I'm happy you enjoyed my little poem, I had fun writing this.. I'm going to sleep soon myself, but had to say, 'thank you mon ami', first.. May heaven's stars light up your dreams my friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/5/2017 11:31:00 AM

With a write like this it is hard not to fall into temptation, Susan! This femme fatale knows all the tricks. I am sure the sponsor would not fail to be enchanted by her allure! But then, not all minds think alike! ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/5/2017 4:33:00 PM

..and thank God for the level-headed minds that don't fall for the seductive 'panther purr' routine..lol! This was a fun little write and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you Paul, for your lovely encouragement and support of my poetry and the time you spend reading my writes. Your wonderful 'critiques' fill my heart with delight my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Michaels

Date: 11/18/2017 3:59:00 AM

Excellent write Susan, that works so well on both the literal and metaphorical levels!! Brilliant closing line, too!! All the best, John.

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/18/2017 8:05:00 PM

John, I glad that you enjoyed my poem. This one was so much fun to write.. Thank you for your wonderful appreciation, your comment is awesome and thank you for sharing your lovely thoughts with me.. ~Susan

Bernard Chan

Date: 11/2/2017 8:24:00 PM

A deft portrait of the femme feline, line after line! Such an entertaining write, Susan :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 11/2/2017 9:13:00 PM

Thank you Bernard, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was really a fun poem to write. You always leave such great comments of kindness, wonderful encouragement and support that I appreciate so much.., Many thanks for your friendship.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2017 7:39:00 PM

a big ME-OW for this sensuous metaphorical poem, Susan!!!

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/5/2017 10:02:00 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much for your enthusiastic response to my poem. I so appreciate your comment and your visiting my page. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/5/2017 7:39:00 PM

WOW! I love this Susan! Certain females do remind one of a felines traits, don't they? An a amazing write! : )

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/5/2017 10:00:00 PM

Hi Connie, thank you so very much for your wonderful comment. I truly appreciate your comment and taking the time to read my poem. I'm happy that you enjoyed :)

Manny Paras

Date: 8/5/2017 12:07:00 PM

This makes me roar; very impressive. Thank you for your wishes!

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/5/2017 4:11:00 PM

Hi Manny, thank you for your wonderful comment. I'm happy you got a roar out of it :) and you're welcome.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/5/2017 9:47:00 AM

Very nicely penned my friend...just purrfect lol...god bless...^WW^

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/5/2017 10:10:00 AM

Ohhh WW.., your comment makes me sooo purrrrfectly happy! lol! Thank you for the read :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/4/2017 5:58:00 PM

Hello Susan, Dropping by to check-out your poetry. (Thanks also for your recent read of my poem: "The Curve of Time.") WOW -- This one is a marvelous rhyme for sure. Panther Purr and it's concentrated imagery certainly captured the attention of this reader!! Very Well-Done!! Best Wishes for the Weekend, Gary

Susan Ashley
Date: 8/4/2017 11:17:00 PM

Hi Gary, I'm glad the Panther Purr captured you. Thank you for your wonderful comment, I appreciate you stopping by to read my poem! :)