Panning of the Vein

For a time we all must go away,
like orphaned memories
whose only wish is to remain...
like wind chimes in a hurricane
we lose the scent
of song
of self 
of flesh
seeking to find what we think 
we want and wish for-

For a time we must all go our way,
running swift to glean the chain
to stroll from happy-saited-just to suckle pain:
lone lemming on the slippery edge,
for a time we all must go away-

Making trails like Saturn's rings
crossing minds with death's clear intent, 
the opaque of pleasant things,
(brittle creatures in metal galaxies)
seeking what's inside our veins...
For a while, despite the truth of denial
like sandcastles in a driven rain
piece by piece or whole grain,
we all must go away.

but 
we'll come back full(bloated) circle
after a thorough
panning of the vein
when the path back home 
sings like a golden finch,
post-warm-hearted rain...
for a time, we all must go our way-

 for Tracie and Linda
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Nance Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 6:07 PM
So many great lines I dare not repeat them for I would go over the character limit for the comments, this packed a powerful punch with unique descriptions, much enjoyed!
Edwards Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 4:50 AM
Such an amazing poem Anthony..Im sorry I missed it before I left.. Thank you for the dedication, another one for my favs xx
Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 4:52 PM
Yes, youth must go its own way but some go to the good and not the bad..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 9:54 AM
A pleasure to read your poetry today Anthony. I will try to come back later this week to read more. I have a spring cold and not up to reading for too long. Have a wonderful week. Love, Carol
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