Panic

The heat is like a burlap bag
That’s fastened ‘round your head.
In several minutes, you’ll succumb
And feel like you are dead.

The subway, though, is cold as vodka
When it’s nicely chilled.
Although there’s not a seat, the coolness
Makes you rather thrilled.

The train is plowing on its path
When suddenly, it stops.
The lights grow dim, the A/C dies
And man, your heart just drops.

The panic starts to pulse and pound
As sweat pops from your pores.
Attempts to think of pleasant things
Your racing brain ignores.

You keep your eyes fixed on the page,
But nothing’s making sense.
You wonder if the others trapped
Are feeling quite as tense.

Then suddenly the lights go bright;
The train begins to move.
The air kicks in, your heart slows down;
Imaginings improve.

It doesn’t take too much to go
From calm to full-blown panic.
Just fathom how I would have fared
On board the doomed Titanic!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/17/2014 8:56:00 PM
So glad I'm rutting around in your back pages. This is a gem. The way you wrapped it up is pretty close to genius. But let's not get carried away. :) Peace. :)
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Date: 6/20/2012 7:47:00 PM
I can picture me in this scene and it's not a pretty sight. lol Great write, Ilene! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/20/2012 6:23:00 PM
I can relate so I certainly enjoyed this one, Ilene <3
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Date: 6/20/2012 5:51:00 PM
'...just fathom how I would have fared,' I LOVE that line! It is such a pleasure to visit your pages. There is always perfect poetry awaiting me. Blessings and Hugs, Keith :)
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