Pangs of Love

When love has brought me to the depths of pain
And I cry no more for crying is in vain
Then I close my eyes...
Darkness is all that I see
Cold and emptiness fills the place where light used to be

Lost and afraid I'm all alone
No place have I, that I can call home

Stumbling and to the ground  I fall
Trying to go beyond this wall

Joyous crevice pray bring light
With it comes hope and strength to fight
With hope comes memories bringing more hate
Sealing the crevice along with my fate

I close my eyes once more to hide
Here I lie with darkness by my side
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
March 15, 2025 at 6:28 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
A  Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 8:11 PM
CARMIN, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:46 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Carmin. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 07/03/2012
Williams Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 8:45 AM
Carmin welcome to the soup, hope and faith you can't go wrong...David
Henderson Avatar
July 2, 2012 at 3:35 PM
Well lay day your pride and toss it aside. I say, anyway. Peace and blessings.
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