Pandora's Box

you opened your eyes but closed your mind
oblivious to dreams I kept inside
you saw the package but not the treasure
all of those late nights we were together

you spent the passion but saved your heart
keeping those two things far, far apart
nothing ever ventured, nothing ever gained
so good at keeping it all self-contained

you pulled the ribbon opening Pandora's box
you twisted the key in a rusty lock
you wound the toy just a little too tight
leaving in haste when you saw the red light

I thought I had it under control
I could play the game and you'd never know
you were much smarter than I thought
you saw the ruse right from the start

gently, you tried to let me down
distancing me with silent sounds
what you couldn't see--failed to understand
I knew your game but couldn't outrun your plan

you pulled the ribbon opening Pandora's box
you twisted the key in a rusty lock
you wound the toy just a little too tight
leaving in haste when you saw the red light

I could see your future and I wasn't a part
you weren't completely honest when we started
I knew there was another, but not the whole connection
how you had already promised your love and affection

so as we go forward with an uneasy truce
bury what's dead between me and you
no tourniquet will completely ever stop my bleed
you'll say you didn't promise to be what I need

you asked me once if the wound was still deep
you can figure that out in this song if you read
what starts with white lies, ends sadly with truth
it ebbs and then flows with each phase of the moon

you pulled the ribbon opening Pandora's box
you twisted the key in a rusty lock
you wound the toy just a little too tight
leaving in haste when you saw the red light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 9, 2011 at 4:34 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals J.B. Love Carol
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March 7, 2011 at 4:40 PM
Congratulations..Sara
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October 1, 2010 at 6:15 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week JB ... Bravo .. love Jayne
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September 29, 2010 at 8:55 AM
J B, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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September 29, 2010 at 8:46 AM
Hello! J.B., CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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September 27, 2010 at 12:00 PM
This is defiantly a poem for the fave collection. This was a beautiful piece, i love your first two lines, they were so powerful, i also loved this line, "what starts with white lies, ends sadly with truth", i have been there. this was an amazing piece, perfectly penned, what great verse! I will cherish this piece by far. Congratulations on your feature, it was well given to you. Love, Madison
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September 27, 2010 at 6:29 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week J B. Love, Carol
Smalling Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:13 AM
A great lyrical write, JB. Love the magic of the personalized experience of the myth. Love every part of it.
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September 24, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Not at all JB, the line has a whole different meaning in this Gem, good write and ery enjoyed....Michael
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September 24, 2010 at 10:07 AM
Very telling. Excellent keeping the pattern throughout such long poem.
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