Get Your Premium Membership

Pandora's Box

you opened your eyes but closed your mind oblivious to dreams I kept inside you saw the package but not the treasure all of those late nights we were together you spent the passion but saved your heart keeping those two things far, far apart nothing ever ventured, nothing ever gained so good at keeping it all self-contained you pulled the ribbon opening Pandora's box you twisted the key in a rusty lock you wound the toy just a little too tight leaving in haste when you saw the red light I thought I had it under control I could play the game and you'd never know you were much smarter than I thought you saw the ruse right from the start gently, you tried to let me down distancing me with silent sounds what you couldn't see--failed to understand I knew your game but couldn't outrun your plan you pulled the ribbon opening Pandora's box you twisted the key in a rusty lock you wound the toy just a little too tight leaving in haste when you saw the red light I could see your future and I wasn't a part you weren't completely honest when we started I knew there was another, but not the whole connection how you had already promised your love and affection so as we go forward with an uneasy truce bury what's dead between me and you no tourniquet will completely ever stop my bleed you'll say you didn't promise to be what I need you asked me once if the wound was still deep you can figure that out in this song if you read what starts with white lies, ends sadly with truth it ebbs and then flows with each phase of the moon you pulled the ribbon opening Pandora's box you twisted the key in a rusty lock you wound the toy just a little too tight leaving in haste when you saw the red light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/9/2011 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals J.B. Love Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 3/7/2011 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2010 6:15:00 AM
Congrates on having your poem featured this week JB ... Bravo .. love Jayne
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2010 8:55:00 AM
J B, CoNGRATULATIoNS oN HAVING YoUR PoEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2010 8:46:00 AM
Hello! J.B., CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2010 12:00:00 PM
This is defiantly a poem for the fave collection. This was a beautiful piece, i love your first two lines, they were so powerful, i also loved this line, "what starts with white lies, ends sadly with truth", i have been there. this was an amazing piece, perfectly penned, what great verse! I will cherish this piece by far. Congratulations on your feature, it was well given to you. Love, Madison
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2010 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week J B. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 9/26/2010 5:13:00 AM
A great lyrical write, JB. Love the magic of the personalized experience of the myth. Love every part of it.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2010 5:52:00 PM
Not at all JB, the line has a whole different meaning in this Gem, good write and ery enjoyed....Michael
Login to Reply
Date: 9/24/2010 10:07:00 AM
Very telling. Excellent keeping the pattern throughout such long poem.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs