Palomino

I see in the field,
The beauty of his gallop;
Grazing on the land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 12:50 PM
I have never seen this and would like to someday, Elizabeth, sounds wonderful! nice write, jim
Richards Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Through your eyes...we can see it too! Thanks for that!! ~ love, Carrie
Winter Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 6:39 AM
I see it too! Excellent imagery! So free and beautiful. Love, Shar
P. Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 3:45 AM
wonderful senryu! ~ Arany
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 2:59 AM
Nice haiku Elizabeth..........Danielle
Martin Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 2:57 AM
Nice word painting of the Palomino. Tyler
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 2:41 AM
Beautiful work, I can picture it too...Raul
Goombi Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 1:57 AM
There is beauty in the gallop, nice work
Esquire Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 11:48 PM
Dear Elizabeth, Do YOU live in the mid-west? When I lived in Nevada it was Wild Mustangs Absolutely Awesome How YOU snapped this Picture so Clear, so Vivid I walk over, start to brushing his long Gold Mane Superb YOU are the Queen Of Senryu ALWAYS YOURS...HG
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