Pallid Mornings

Bladed implement,
Cutting through shaving cream snow:
Fields of fresh stubble.


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An Ode to Shaving
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 1:04 AM
wow, I LOVE this kind of symbolic senryu
Goff Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 9:35 AM
I see it here in Minnesota, nice, original thoughts, my old friend...jimbo
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