Palindromes Seasons

The grass "dewed" in spring’s early morning shimmer
Upon a crocus lay an "alula" in the sun with a glimmer
A symbol of many flights on every "level" there is to be
Whether it be "solos" or those together, feeling free

Often at "noon" Robin hop across the sunny land
Their "stots" fun to watch, then so still they do stand
Summer brings the "pop" of fireworks in the sky to see
Hummingbirds, "kayak", cookouts and bumble bee

Fall for me can sometimes bring on a "doom mood"
As fun summer "sagas" end, squirrels scramble for food
Winter looms but "live not evil", for there is Christmas "Eve"
Followed by Christmas, a "tenet" most important to believe

Heidi Sands

9/26/18

*Placed 2nd in Palindromes 2 Contest. 

One palindrome for each sentence.(oops one sentence has 2)  Difficulty getting the bold to work for the words.


Dewed - Past tense verb of wet
Alula - Broken bird's wing
Level - Horizontal plane above or below given point
Solos - Plural for one singular person
Noon - Midday
Stots - Bounces
Pop - Explosive sound
Kayak - Canoe of a type used originally by the Inuit, made of light frame
Doom Mood - Feeling of things going badly or to get worse
Sagas - Long stories of achievement
Live Not on Evil - Choice not to live evil
Eve - Period of time immediately before an event
Tenet - Principle of belief, especially one of the main principles of religion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/24/2018 7:56:00 PM
Heidi, congratulations on your great win in this palindromes contest.. great rhyme and imagery
Login to Reply
Sands Avatar
Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2018 8:12:00 PM
Thank you Eve. ! :)
Date: 10/24/2018 2:09:00 PM
Fall gives that melancholy feeling..Very nicely penned Heidi..Congrats on your win
Login to Reply
Sands Avatar
Heidi Sands
Date: 10/24/2018 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 9/26/2018 9:19:00 PM
I would be terrified to try working with Palindromes but, you've outdone yourself with this poem. Excellent!
Login to Reply
Sands Avatar
Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2018 10:39:00 PM
I didn't think I was up for the challenge , but tried for the first time. I really appreciate your comment. Thank you :)
Date: 9/26/2018 7:34:00 PM
((((WoW))))...my Palindrome friend...excellent write Heidi...a Fav...love & light...^WW^
Login to Reply
Sands Avatar
Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2018 7:55:00 PM
Thanks so much my Palindrome friend. I just got interrupted from my response to you, a tree just fell on my house. talk later
Date: 9/26/2018 1:57:00 PM
Flows so beautifully despite the difficult words..enjoyable ride in the scenery of the seasons..well done, Heidi..a winning poem.
Login to Reply
Sands Avatar
Heidi Sands
Date: 9/26/2018 1:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. I have never done one of these. :)
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter