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Palindrome the First/Jp

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.                                         Orange
                                   Moon over the vale
                          Paints a clear starry sky tonight
                              My love is fresh, free and
                          Paints a clear starry sky tonight
                                 Moon over the vale,
                                          Orange
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Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/4/2010 5:10:00 PM

I give you a high mark just for attempting this form. I like the idea of an orange moon. Great thought! Thank you asa always! Gerard.

Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 7/4/2010 4:50:00 PM

Have I told you I love orange moons? Great poem, thanks for commenting on mine :) -Grace

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/4/2010 2:44:00 PM

Like the form and your choice of words in your poem, Doris! And thanks for your comments. What you could also do is to cut some bacon in small dices and friy them a short time in your pan before adding the brussel sprout. If you cut the bottom of the sprouts croswise with a knife (but only a bit and not deep) it will help you to cook your veggi..Glad that you like the smell!!!...Gert

John Weber

Date: 7/3/2010 5:36:00 PM

Vivid imagery here, Doris! Torn between the sunset and the full moon springs to mind. I always let the ripples pull me back, even if only in the back of my mind when I press real hard with my clumsy fists. Peace.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2010 2:22:00 PM

Really good one Doris.. my entry is Ignition.. good luck to u.. u funny lady.. making me laugh all the time.. I hear those Georgia boys are pretty cool.. so keep that great hubby .. these Italian guys are good but luv to fight and make up way too much..haha.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...

Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 7/3/2010 12:02:00 PM

I like this, but like sara I'm not familiar with this form, but I hope you place with your work *RJK