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Pale blue silk flung across heaven Faint goldenrod in the east North wind blows its mighty power The heat pump hums to say the least Upon a cold winter morning Thinking what love should be I can't remember those loving Moments, they've disappeared from me Once again to be touched lightly To be told I'm loved in Special ways, if only for a second Each and every day Unforced reminders of your love That flows from thoughts of when__ Once our love was young, unhurried. Remember way back then

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/8/2024 10:16:00 AM

Sara, such a pensive poem in shades of "pale blue." Wonderful image - the vibrancy of first love fading into pale blues. Nice play on words. The emotions in this poem are so well expressed. Sending you blessings and prayers.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2024 11:54:00 AM

Ahhh!! Thank you, Sam. I need all the blessings and prayers I can get. I am delighted you liked my work. Sara K

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/7/2024 11:58:00 AM

Fleeting memories of times gone by, with much happening to cloud them. I could so relate to your superb thoughts in this poem Sara. Its lovely, I read it twice, because I have had so very many thoughts on this subject, just the same as yours. You wrote it beautifully. Many best wishes.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/7/2024 1:56:00 PM

I think we all do from time to time have some of these thoughts. Then maybe we can reignite the spark that lights the flame. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/6/2024 6:32:00 AM

A beautiful poem Sara. Such endearing sentiments you express: Once again to be touched lightly To be told I'm loved in Special ways, if only for a second Each and every day--Moments that make life worthwhile!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/6/2024 6:32:00 AM

Yes, they do. Thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/6/2024 4:21:00 AM

Nostalgic and so tender. Somewhere along the way, sometimes the magic of love is lost, I wonder why …

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/6/2024 5:59:00 AM

US, sometimes life engulfs us and we don't take the time that is needed to keep the embers burning. Also, at a certain point in life the physical part of our make-up(hormones) changes because of aging. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/5/2024 5:04:00 PM

Dear Sara, A wonderful reflection on love, longing, and the passage of time. You show winter’s chill juxtaposed with the warmth of affection and reminiscence. The longing for tender moments and unforced love shows us of the beauty and fragility of human connection. Your words capture the essence of yearning for love’s gentle touch, even amidst life’s complexities. Your heartfelt verses evoke many emotions. Excellent, Sara, in many ways! - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/6/2024 5:57:00 AM

Your visit is uplifting, Daniel. I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment. Sara K

Mark Hughes

Date: 2/5/2024 1:46:00 PM

I find a certain connection with your very touching poem, well done Sara!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2024 2:22:00 PM

Why, thank you, Mark. I appreciate the visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/5/2024 9:48:00 AM

The longing for love and the memories of a past love that seem to have faded away, and the desire to be reminded of it in small, unforced ways, Sara. Your vivid imagery to describe the winter morning, such as "pale blue silk flung across heaven" is so well depicted.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/5/2024 10:09:00 AM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K