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Pajama Jeans Painted

pajama jeans painted she loves me acquainted learning to breathe her rainbow love showers me from tears above silence was it her kiss prepared for me closing my eyes she brushes into me my seams burst into beautiful colours she patches me to her pajama jeans painted ?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2018 7:46:00 PM

ahhh, I think you have done another name change? I see that signature ? at the bottom. I like the imagery here of the seams bursting into beautiful colors. the title of pajama jeans really drew me to this one.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/18/2018 1:56:00 PM

I noticed you’re new, welcome. You will enjoy the friendship here. Love the shape, great flow, and the subject, Wool. Thank you for reading my poem and leaving such a n inspiring compliment" This Happy Memory " Hugs Eve ~`*

Wool Man
Date: 1/18/2018 2:11:00 PM

well hello Eve Ropes ... ok ... yes we are new here ... and you have surely just made our time worth while on this write ... we are very pleased that you have taken the time to place your priceless time and opinion on our writing ... appreciation be due you ... thank you very much ...