Painting

P alette of blue and gold, A swirl of stars that hold I llusions of unrest, but N ow seem to protect T he sleeping town below, I mmersed in Vincent's glow. N obody could invoke the G enius of his stroke.

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Edward Snyder

Date: 9/19/2015 3:32:00 PM

Nice, nice write Heather

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2013 12:41:00 AM

my free verse just doesn't measure up to yours, Heather. Either it's too simplistic or it becomes to lyrical most of the time!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/30/2013 12:40:00 AM

hmmm, just don't think you have written anything I have not already seen!! Anyway, the captcha was one I remembered seeing some time ago, not recently. I have seen some really great one. But didn't write them down. One time I saw SExy. but it's impossible to write a good acrostic using an X and then a Y at beginning of the last two lines of it!!

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/15/2013 2:29:00 PM

Painting is one thing I can honestly say I suck at. I tried a few times. I've got mega respect for anyone who can. You paint, right?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 10:28:00 PM

another awesome acrostic and you know,I think I have now read every single one of your poems here at Soup. Do you have any not posted. Sincerely, you are one of the best talents here at poetrysoup. LOVE your style!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/22/2012 9:53:00 PM

So this is how it is done, the last line is brilliant!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/19/2012 11:17:00 AM

YOU have this form licked! :) Happy Holiday. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2012 7:47:00 PM

Heather, your acrostic is a image itself,, love the painting... , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem, Good night*PD