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Painted Clouds

Cloud formations etched with crimson aglow vanquish angst, magic is sketched 1/4/2017

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2017 8:50:00 PM

a lovely image!

Donna Roberts
Date: 1/26/2017 11:05:00 PM

I noticed your the Boss of.the Contests today ;)

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/19/2017 11:59:00 PM

Nice haiku - well done enjambment. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Eve Roper

Date: 1/17/2017 8:26:00 PM

Very beautiful, Donna, :) a 7

Phil Capitano

Date: 1/17/2017 5:17:00 PM

Very cool.

Donna Roberts
Date: 1/17/2017 5:55:00 PM

;) thanku

Donna Roberts
Date: 1/17/2017 5:54:00 PM

;) thanku

Chris Green

Date: 1/11/2017 8:37:00 AM

This was beautiful and you are right, often seeing such beauty will vanquish the angst we feel inside, if only temporary.

Chris Green
Date: 1/11/2017 9:56:00 AM

Syllables and theme are all that counts and your poem is a perfect Haiku. Word count doesn't matter as long as the syllables are correct.

Donna Roberts
Date: 1/11/2017 9:30:00 AM

Do you know if it is correct Haiku? Syllables were right , I think but amount of words, not sure!

Donna Roberts
Date: 1/11/2017 9:14:00 AM

Thanks now, I too, have to learn to stop rhyming ;) hard habit to break!