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Painted Clouds

Cloud formations etched
                      with crimson aglow vanquish
                        angst, magic is sketched




                               1/4/2017

Copyright © Donna Roberts | Year Posted 2017

angstartcolornaturehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

January 26, 2017 at 8:50 PM

a lovely image!

January 26, 2017 at 11:05 PM

I noticed your the Boss of.the Contests today ;)

January 19, 2017 at 11:59 PM

Nice haiku - well done enjambment. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

January 17, 2017 at 8:26 PM

Very beautiful, Donna, :) a 7

January 17, 2017 at 5:17 PM

Very cool.

January 17, 2017 at 5:55 PM

;) thanku

January 17, 2017 at 5:54 PM

;) thanku

January 11, 2017 at 8:37 AM

This was beautiful and you are right, often seeing such beauty will vanquish the angst we feel inside, if only temporary.

January 11, 2017 at 9:56 AM

Syllables and theme are all that counts and your poem is a perfect Haiku. Word count doesn't matter as long as the syllables are correct.

January 11, 2017 at 9:30 AM

Do you know if it is correct Haiku? Syllables were right , I think but amount of words, not sure!

January 11, 2017 at 9:14 AM

Thanks now, I too, have to learn to stop rhyming ;) hard habit to break!

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