Painted Butterflies

painted butterflies
fluttering in powder sand
beauty marks faded
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sierra Avatar
September 3, 2009 at 4:12 PM
hehe thats okay.:) thankyou for the comments.
Sierra Avatar
August 23, 2009 at 6:01 PM
lol thankyou. :D hehe not its not weird for it coming from a straight man. I just hope my dreams will come true and that i can be a poet :D But thanks again for the comment. Im gonna keep this style as well with my original style hope ya read more Ariabelle
Burton Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 11:54 PM
:):) really enjoyed this and also loved the butterflys and the paint... weird from a straight man huh...? :) enjoy your night.
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August 22, 2009 at 4:53 PM
Great use of imagery for an interesting view. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent here. Karen
Sierra Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 2:33 PM
thanks for the comments.:)
Freeman Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 2:25 PM
In the natural forms, all beauty marks fade after awhile, but I know a power thats makes all things new. Beautiful poem, good story. Sincerely Moses
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 1:18 PM
Nice Haiku but sad. Keep writing. Sara
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