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Painted Butterflies

painted butterflies fluttering in powder sand beauty marks faded

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Ariabelle Sierra

Date: 9/3/2009 4:12:00 PM

hehe thats okay.:) thankyou for the comments.

Ariabelle Sierra

Date: 8/23/2009 6:01:00 PM

lol thankyou. :D hehe not its not weird for it coming from a straight man. I just hope my dreams will come true and that i can be a poet :D But thanks again for the comment. Im gonna keep this style as well with my original style hope ya read more Ariabelle

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/22/2009 11:54:00 PM

:):) really enjoyed this and also loved the butterflys and the paint... weird from a straight man huh...? :) enjoy your night.

Date: 8/22/2009 4:53:00 PM

Great use of imagery for an interesting view. I see you haven't been at The Soup long. Welcome! I hope you are enjoying your time spent here. Karen

Ariabelle Sierra

Date: 8/22/2009 2:33:00 PM

thanks for the comments.:)

John Freeman

Date: 8/22/2009 2:25:00 PM

In the natural forms, all beauty marks fade after awhile, but I know a power thats makes all things new. Beautiful poem, good story. Sincerely Moses

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2009 1:18:00 PM

Nice Haiku but sad. Keep writing. Sara