Paint of War

hand of nature splashes paint  on war's canvas, dipped in black tones


Contest sponsored by Silent One, Monoku 4:  Colors
3rd Jan 2018
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Dietrich Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Nicely done, Leon. Congrats for your win.
Ashley Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 4:21 PM
A deep and thought provoking monoku, Leon, beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Scars Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:08 PM
deep and poignant, great one, congrats : )-luloo
Gupta Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 3:49 AM
Very deep ... Makes the reader thoughtful ... Congratulations on your excellent win ...
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 12:15 PM
- Hi Leon, congratulations on your winning line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Terrific write Leon, congratulations...
Gauthier Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Great monoku. Congrats on your win, Leon.
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 9:18 AM
You expressed the dark feelings of war extremely well, Leon. Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul
One Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 7:58 AM
War helps no one.. deep one liner Leon..Congratulations on your first place in the colours monoku contest
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