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Paint Me

Paint me
plum tree

Blue clouds
no shrouds

birds fly
sky high

capture
rapture

nature
nurture

embrace
my space

empty
lonely

paint me
calm sea

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Date: 8/29/2015 10:43:00 PM
Nice work! The imagery is great, and even more so since you used few words in each line.
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Josefina Costales
Date: 8/30/2015 9:29:00 AM
thanks Phillip, appreciate your kind comments

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