Pains

Physical suffering, too many,
Afflicted by physical diseases and pains,
Inconceivable that nothing can be done,
Never-Never Land; an imaginary place without diseases and pains, could that be?
Serenity; quiet the mind, body, soul, guide me Dear Lord, free me of disease and pain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 2:58 PM
just seeing this one again. so you have a little over a month for the brace thing to come off? are you FEELING like you are better? SUre hope so. I have to get off here really fast. Luv, Andrea
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 5:41 PM
Doc told me I must wear my neck brace until my lumbar surgery to repair a fractured spine, March 26th. Once healed, I'll have to have extensive therapy on both my neck and lower back. This year is a nightmare, but I keep my mind mentally busy so I don't go crazy. Thanks for asking. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Did you ever tell me how the cervical surgery went? wAs just reading the reply you made to my comment on this poem back in November. Sorry I cannot find a new one of yours I have not seen yet. Maybe I have seen all your lovely poems!!
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 6:10 PM
Is there courses on PS on how to write Haiku of other styles of poetry? If so, where are they?
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 8, 2013 at 6:09 PM
I have to wear my neck brace 24-7 so I won't know how successful my surgery is. The neck brace comes off in April, 2 months wearing it. may I should have my lumbar surgery and hopefully by July physical therapy. Thanks to PS I've kept myself mentally busy helping, spirits high. Warm Smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
January 8, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Connie Gildersleeve :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 5:37 PM
Thanks for your congratulation for my featured poem. I'm humbled. At the time I wrote because it was very personal and it still is, but I'm recovering from my first surgery and in April I'll have my second. Sometimes one has to free one's mind from the physical pain . Warm Smile Always, Connie
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 9:26 AM
Serenity is what most want in this noisy and busy world..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Sara, thanks for your comment and stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 11:34 PM
connie, my heart goes out to you. I have this now too, but to a small degree compared to you. right now I have no soupmail or member area, but when I get it back, you can write me of your problems. I feel like you must be someone who suffers a lot and my prayers for you. Luv, Andrea
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Andrea, when I wrote this I was told I had to have a 4th cervical surgery, and a 6th lumbar surgery. Went through, "Why Me", felt sorry for myself. Over that now. Cervical surgery tomorrow. Warm Smiles, Connie
Tsiluma Avatar
November 2, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Poignant write this! Pain inflicts the body and mind and robs us of joy. It's human to hope for a world without pain - faith in such a world keeps our hope alive. Well written Acrostic!
Gildersleeve Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 12:54 PM
Thanks Vicky for you lovely comment. Have a nice day. Warm Smiles, Connie
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace