Pains

Physical suffering, too many,
Afflicted by physical diseases and pains,
Inconceivable that nothing can be done,
Never-Never Land; an imaginary place without diseases and pains, could that be?
Serenity; quiet the mind, body, soul, guide me Dear Lord, free me of disease and pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/6/2013 2:58:00 PM
just seeing this one again. so you have a little over a month for the brace thing to come off? are you FEELING like you are better? SUre hope so. I have to get off here really fast. Luv, Andrea
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 3/6/2013 5:41:00 PM
Doc told me I must wear my neck brace until my lumbar surgery to repair a fractured spine, March 26th. Once healed, I'll have to have extensive therapy on both my neck and lower back. This year is a nightmare, but I keep my mind mentally busy so I don't go crazy. Thanks for asking. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
Date: 2/8/2013 3:54:00 PM
Did you ever tell me how the cervical surgery went? wAs just reading the reply you made to my comment on this poem back in November. Sorry I cannot find a new one of yours I have not seen yet. Maybe I have seen all your lovely poems!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/8/2013 6:10:00 PM
Is there courses on PS on how to write Haiku of other styles of poetry? If so, where are they?
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 2/8/2013 6:09:00 PM
I have to wear my neck brace 24-7 so I won't know how successful my surgery is. The neck brace comes off in April, 2 months wearing it. may I should have my lumbar surgery and hopefully by July physical therapy. Thanks to PS I've kept myself mentally busy helping, spirits high. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 1/8/2013 2:01:00 PM
Connie Gildersleeve :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/11/2013 5:37:00 PM
Thanks for your congratulation for my featured poem. I'm humbled. At the time I wrote because it was very personal and it still is, but I'm recovering from my first surgery and in April I'll have my second. Sometimes one has to free one's mind from the physical pain . Warm Smile Always, Connie
Date: 1/7/2013 9:26:00 AM
Serenity is what most want in this noisy and busy world..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 1/7/2013 12:51:00 PM
Sara, thanks for your comment and stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 11/5/2012 11:34:00 PM
connie, my heart goes out to you. I have this now too, but to a small degree compared to you. right now I have no soupmail or member area, but when I get it back, you can write me of your problems. I feel like you must be someone who suffers a lot and my prayers for you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/7/2013 12:50:00 PM
Andrea, when I wrote this I was told I had to have a 4th cervical surgery, and a 6th lumbar surgery. Went through, "Why Me", felt sorry for myself. Over that now. Cervical surgery tomorrow. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 11/2/2012 12:53:00 PM
Poignant write this! Pain inflicts the body and mind and robs us of joy. It's human to hope for a world without pain - faith in such a world keeps our hope alive. Well written Acrostic!
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Date: 1/7/2013 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Vicky for you lovely comment. Have a nice day. Warm Smiles, Connie
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