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Painful Yet Peaceful Ending

Why am I still breathing
After all the torture and bleeding
Many thoughts that poison my mind
Inside the darkness is feeding
Crushed by my fate
I reach death's gate
The unbearable pain awaits
In my dreams I begin to wheep
My soul leaves me
I die in my sleep...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/14/2009 4:52:00 PM
depressing... good ryming though, keep going!------Ell
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:32:00 PM
oh that is so sad. ugh. very good write. so sad though. autumn
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