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Painful Yet Peaceful Ending

Why am I still breathing After all the torture and bleeding Many thoughts that poison my mind Inside the darkness is feeding Crushed by my fate I reach death's gate The unbearable pain awaits In my dreams I begin to wheep My soul leaves me I die in my sleep...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 10/14/2009 4:52:00 PM
depressing... good ryming though, keep going!------Ell
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:32:00 PM
oh that is so sad. ugh. very good write. so sad though. autumn
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