Painful Yet Peaceful Ending

Why am I still breathing
After all the torture and bleeding
Many thoughts that poison my mind
Inside the darkness is feeding
Crushed by my fate
I reach death's gate
The unbearable pain awaits
In my dreams I begin to wheep
My soul leaves me
I die in my sleep...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 14, 2009 at 4:52 PM
depressing... good ryming though, keep going!------Ell
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October 14, 2009 at 4:32 PM
oh that is so sad. ugh. very good write. so sad though. autumn
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