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Painful Side of Love

I don’t know why I long for love For though it’s quite different from pain They often feel the same, really Both can drive you insane If you’re a stranger And you treat me wrong I might hurt for a minute But it’ll never be for long The hurt is just that much deeper When it comes from family or friends When love is involved, more is expected And the cut is harder to mend It’s easy to lose what you never had If I don’t care for you then I’ll be ok But when love is present for a sweet goodbye I’m always—always in dismay They say love is pain Even for the perfect pair So why keep asking When it only hurts to care

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/31/2008 2:48:00 PM
Dangit! You did it again... I'm bawling, well, on the inside, but a little bit still leaks from my eyes every time I read one of your poems. Beautiful, Mel. Absolutely beautiful.
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Date: 10/19/2008 1:38:00 PM
Very sweet. True words and thoughts of love. excellent write. God bless Michael
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Date: 10/19/2008 4:57:00 AM
Very interesting poem - Through deep contemplation I learned that true love is sacrifice - I would sacrifice all I am for my wife - Her happiness comes before my own always - People often confuse love as something that will bring them happiness but happiness is something that is born with-in - Love is but the opportunity to show another that you would sacrifice all for their happiness regardless of your own pain - When you love in this way you are truly untouchable - God Bless
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Date: 10/18/2008 11:37:00 AM
I love this Melanie. It exposes the heart so well. I also love the rhyming scheme in the poem. Thanks for sharing this wonderful write.
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