Painful Sadness

P-aralysed.     S-uffering
A-lways.         A-lone
I-nside.          D-estroyed
N-ervously.     N-umb
F-eeling.         E-mpty
U-nloved.        S-ore
L-onely.          S-ilence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 10:17 PM
A well crafted and clever way of depicting Painful Sadness. Brilliant to say the least.
Kinch  Avatar
March 27, 2017 at 1:58 AM
Thank you.
Pett Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 1:43 PM
This is very clever and so well written Elizabeth, inspirational piece, Roy. :))
Kinch  Avatar
March 26, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Thank you so much Roy.
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 9:38 PM
very interesting way to do this, using just the adjectives in short acrostics. Clever!
Kinch  Avatar
March 25, 2017 at 1:43 AM
Thank you Andrea
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