Pain Through Time

Beneath the awning
I stand and contemplate life
All pain included

Hurt and pain gathered
Everything thought within time
Destroying all loss

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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August 23, 2011 at 6:13 PM
I fine write Russ. I could see you standing under an awning in the rain just thinking. God Bless, JB Sorry about my reply to your comment. sometimes my puter shifts on me.
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August 23, 2011 at 4:07 PM
This is a very sombre image. It makes me want to be quiet and think or run away. Great meaning here.
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