Pain Strike

I did things that makes you happy Things that makes me cry I know I’m happy with you That I can give my best in you You’ve misunderstood Why I am still standing stood Coz I was fooled Of this foolish heart You’ve make me fall And leave a hole You leave me hanging And leave me nothing I give all. . . But you make me fall at my worst
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 21, 2016 at 9:29 PM
Laira, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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January 15, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Laira, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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January 12, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Laira: These words, your words fit your tears. Keep writing what you feel. Jim
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December 26, 2014 at 5:21 AM
- Warm welcome to P- soup, Laira :) - Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
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December 25, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Laira, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy being part of the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, "In The Moment" in hopes it inspires you to write again. I look forward in following you and your poetry:) Enjoy this site, and the coming New Year! From: your new poet friend@-> LINDA <-@
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