Pain : Joy

Pain: the giant predator On life's jungle field; always hunting Joy: the tenuous prey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2013 at 2:50 PM
tenuous!! great word for joy!
Angel-Simon Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 1:09 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Kendrick Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 5:20 AM
Great work..Very true comparisons..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were appreciated..Sara
A   Avatar
May 3, 2013 at 7:44 PM
Hi Angel, I like Joy, ..this is a very clever haiku. I like the cycle of the imagery...xox~ Linda
Palli Avatar
February 28, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Great one!
Horsman Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 5:05 AM
amazing haiku, Angel...
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 2:46 AM
- Yes - Well said in a haiku Angel - oxox// Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 3:39 PM
so true ,great write Angel
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