Pain Is Control

My only friend is pain 
existing in shadow of a fear 
fear of insignificance 
hurting and attacked 
lying in defense 
works are in motion ; grinding their gears 
Looking back, I never had a chance. 
The oppressors are winning 
lying and manipulating 
piping their pipe, and dancing their dance. 
The systems pressure has me breaking 
torturous, unbearable, intolerable 
and yet we allow it to control us. 
breathing its greed through us. 
Revolt. 
question everything 
come to conclusions on your own. 
Be a renegade, find your own way 
The rules to out grow 
To be an individual one day. 
 
 
 
09-07-2009 by J.R. Thornton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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April 13, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Joel, your poem presents a unique, provocative perspective, and does so with excellence. Thank you for creating it and for sharing it.
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April 13, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Thank you for your inspiring comments, and as always thank you for reading
Black Avatar
December 15, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Very nice! I get the message...can definitely relate. Your words can cover so many different scenarios. Great poem!
Thornton Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Thank you very much
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