pain hiku

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07/08/25

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Contest by Brian Strand

\ pierced heart \ €/ secretes~……~ “ nectar “ to solidify “ ^ forming pearl of pain

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2025 12:25:00 PM

what a cool metaphor; pearl of pain!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/8/2025 11:19:00 AM

Anisha, you have created both a visceral and poetic experience in your haiku. Wonderfully written. Blessings!

Dr. Vandana Sharma

Date: 7/7/2025 8:54:00 PM

I can see the dagger piercing the heart and the bleeding of pain. Amazingly done.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/8/2025 12:20:00 AM

Are you an Indian ? Where do you stay ? Blessings