Anisha Dutta Poet Haiku

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07/08/25

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Contest by Brian Strand

pain hiku

                                     \
       pierced heart    \ €/ secretes~……~
                                                            “
                                              nectar  “  to solidify
                                                           “
                                                           ^
                         forming pearl of    pain

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Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2025 at 12:25 PM what a cool metaphor; pearl of pain!

Sam Kauffman July 8, 2025 at 11:19 AM Anisha, you have created both a visceral and poetic experience in your haiku. Wonderfully written. Blessings!

Dr. Vandana Sharma July 7, 2025 at 8:54 PM I can see the dagger piercing the heart and the bleeding of pain. Amazingly done. Anisha Dutta July 8, 2025 at 12:20 AM Are you an Indian ? Where do you stay ? Blessings