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Pain and Loneliness

Loneliness and pain creates a void Dark shadows haunt, torment and torture only reflective thoughts of happiness Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul It is futile to hope and dream Emptiness is overwhelming A deepening sea of nowhere consumes And eats away at every connecting thread Nothing considered worthy remains Destined to walk through life less ordinary Alone, exiled, different and disdained.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/18/2014 6:46:00 PM
a good one on the "emotion" of blue. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 11/10/2013 3:19:00 PM
words can't help or make the sad feelings and lonelyness go away, I know what you are talking abour herem even if it sounds like a cliche for you. my advice is try to spend more time around other people, friends, family if you can because if you close in and hide everything it will be 1000x harder to heal.
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Date: 11/7/2013 5:16:00 AM
In trying to cheer you up, I find my head adorned with this silly lampshade. Won't you smile just once and let me get my halo..... Love ya... Jake
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Date: 11/5/2013 9:04:00 PM
lovely write!
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