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Pain and Loneliness

Loneliness and pain creates a void
 Dark shadows haunt, torment and torture
 only reflective thoughts of happiness
 
 Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul
 It is futile to hope and dream

 Emptiness is overwhelming
 A deepening sea of nowhere consumes
 And eats away at every connecting thread

 Nothing considered worthy remains
 Destined to walk through life less ordinary
 Alone, exiled, different and disdained.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/18/2014 6:46:00 PM
a good one on the "emotion" of blue. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 11/10/2013 3:19:00 PM
words can't help or make the sad feelings and lonelyness go away, I know what you are talking abour herem even if it sounds like a cliche for you. my advice is try to spend more time around other people, friends, family if you can because if you close in and hide everything it will be 1000x harder to heal.
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Date: 11/7/2013 5:16:00 AM
In trying to cheer you up, I find my head adorned with this silly lampshade. Won't you smile just once and let me get my halo..... Love ya... Jake
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Date: 11/5/2013 9:04:00 PM
lovely write!
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