Pain and Gain

While walking alone

Tears were blown

I can't resist

The pain I felt

My mind, say-so

Cry heigh-ho

And after this

The best of bliss..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 19, 2016 at 11:48 PM
Marie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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April 17, 2016 at 7:56 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Marie.
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April 17, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome.
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April 17, 2016 at 7:51 PM
Nicely penned Marie. To embrace oain is to set it free, then follows bliss.
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April 17, 2016 at 7:54 PM
Thank you..
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