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Pain and Gain

While walking alone Tears were blown I can't resist The pain I felt My mind, say-so Cry heigh-ho And after this The best of bliss..

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Skat A

Date: 4/19/2016 11:48:00 PM

Marie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

Date: 4/17/2016 7:56:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Marie.

Jotting Thoughtssite
Date: 4/17/2016 9:49:00 PM

Thank you for the warm welcome.

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/17/2016 7:51:00 PM

Nicely penned Marie. To embrace oain is to set it free, then follows bliss.

Jotting Thoughtssite
Date: 4/17/2016 7:54:00 PM

Thank you..