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Pain

No need to think of yesterday when all you know is pain Theres no use living in the dark surrounded by dark clouds & rain When your huddled in a corner you rather not be known Hidden away from this world feeling destend to be alone Why continue to live this way when your able to shine in the sun only you can set yourself free to learn to love everyone you can chase away the darkness the thunder & the rain learn to live your life in happiness forget all about the pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/28/2013 8:31:00 PM
gud poem nicely written liked the poem very much
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Date: 6/28/2013 6:34:00 AM
congrats on being featured and welcome to Soup, a good write Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/26/2013 1:53:00 AM
This is a nice poem, but much easier said than done.
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Date: 6/10/2013 8:56:00 PM
Hi Caroline, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:47:00 PM
Caroline. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda"
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Date: 6/2/2013 11:44:00 AM
Caroline, a moving poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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