Pain

my heart bet frantically
as i wandered alone
wrath embraced me
but it was on my own
 
this wistful feeling clouded me
as i tried to run
running is never an option
when ur destination is none
 
each vision of my past
formed a wraith unable to erase
i prayed this doesnt last
i tried to escape from this and fastened my pace
 
as wrath of my own embraced me
i tried to cry away the pain
didnt try anymore to break free
cause i knew it will be in vain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/4/2011 3:34:00 AM
Hey guys I really like ur comments and I thank all of U. I am also interested in writing my own books can pls tel me a website were I could post it?
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Date: 6/2/2011 1:58:00 AM
Nivedita, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest :) WN
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:54:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nivedita. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., nivedita
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Nivedita. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:31:00 AM
N.A.!~ CONGRATS!! In my first poem contest, & thank U so much once again 4 supporting my contest. I had a great time reading & judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. always~~~Poet D
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:43:00 PM
super congrats on your excellent win in this contest luv..
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Date: 5/31/2011 11:06:00 PM
wat contes i dont get it?????????
Date: 5/30/2011 4:27:00 AM
Wonderful Write Nivedita...Loved your lines from 1 to 9..Keep'em coming...
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Date: 5/23/2011 8:31:00 AM
Hey...waiting on an encore! Got more!?.... Have a lovely afternoon. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:16:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Nivedita. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 1:50:00 AM
Nivedita, the poem sounds tuned and nice. Its got an empathetic feel and the best lines i liked are the first 4 that truly say something. Gudos! Fredjeev
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:14:00 PM
Wow, I feel your poem and the pain. Very deep. Be well thanks for sharing, ~Faizah
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:48:00 PM
It seems as though sadness and despair are common themes today with the newer poets. Your own wrath embraced you in this heartfelt write,...it almost sounds like a bad nightmare when you can't even run from yourself...thanks for sharing this emotional write. May you find blessings in the littlest things this day, Gwendolen
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:35:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry ... hope u have fun on PS as u share with luv.. come celebrate my birthday with me today .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:29:00 AM
Lovely write on the wistful feelings or wishful feelings
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:28:00 AM
N. A. , welcome to the soup.. pain,, is not the reflection that should flow thru one... nice description on the way pain can cloud ones motion and every thing else... thanks for sharing,..Linda
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