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Pain

P ersistent , aching, gnawing, throbbing each with its measured degree A ll these are effortless words describing a state of being I ndescribable though is pain from personal grief when heart and spirit lay broken N o beating heart escapes, 'less its doors be sealed, shut and bolted

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/5/2010 7:24:00 AM
Creative Acrostic Audrey, love it, especially the last line! love Wilma
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Date: 10/4/2010 12:42:00 PM
I enjoyed this write, thank you for your kind words
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:29:00 AM
Great Acrostic you've penned here, Audrey! And thank you for your kind comment!...Have agreat new week!...Love, Gert
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:45:00 AM
~Oh Happy Day it's the weekend~ I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Audrey. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2010 4:16:00 PM
Great write ..... sarah x
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Date: 10/1/2010 3:40:00 PM
This is one of the best I read today....Michael
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Date: 10/1/2010 3:10:00 PM
Very impressive and creative write on Pain with Acrostic, Audrey
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