Pain

P	ersistent , aching, gnawing, throbbing each with its measured degree

A	ll these are effortless words describing a state of being

I	ndescribable though is pain from personal grief when heart and spirit lay broken

N	o beating heart escapes, 'less its doors be sealed, shut and bolted
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Creative Acrostic Audrey, love it, especially the last line! love Wilma
Webb Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 12:42 PM
I enjoyed this write, thank you for your kind words
Knop Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 7:29 AM
Great Acrostic you've penned here, Audrey! And thank you for your kind comment!...Have agreat new week!...Love, Gert
Brown Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:45 AM
~Oh Happy Day it's the weekend~ I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, and lots of inspiration Audrey. Love, Carol
Hales Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Great write ..... sarah x
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October 1, 2010 at 3:40 PM
This is one of the best I read today....Michael
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 3:10 PM
Very impressive and creative write on Pain with Acrostic, Audrey
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