Pain

My computer arm is gone Everytime I use it pain Agony and despair I no longer can even Put my clothes on without Crying pain agony and despair I hurt it when my washer Keep getting unbalanced When I tried to set it Straight it fought back I snatched and jerked Jerked my arm right out Cry Cry Crying over The pain every word That I write, type pain Agony and despair... Pain Pain Pain You get the picture

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Buffy Fooksss Aka Lynette C.

Date: 4/1/2010 4:43:00 PM

I CAN TWIST BACK IN ITS PLACE FOR YOU.BUT I MIGHT MESS IT UP, AND THEN YOUR ARM WOULD BE PERMENTLY PAINED UP-bUfFy

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 3/30/2010 5:08:00 PM

If I were you I wouldn't post until the pain is better Sara. That and some good physical therapy can get you back in shape in no time so you can write what you feel emotionally more than physically. I'm so sorry this pain afflicts you and I wish you all the best in your healing. And yes we get the picture.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/30/2010 4:04:00 PM

I do know what pain you are talking about. I do not get them yet. Nice write. You wrote in the mommmment . Your arm must have bothered you so. Also thank you for your comment. Yea! Me and James are just having fun. It is a poet rumble . He made a Blog . You should visit it. I like your well express day. I know this poem is no imagination. P.D.

Danny Nunn

Date: 3/30/2010 6:09:00 AM

I see your picture you paint on the pain you have, sure no fun, hope you get better, good write..thanks on Pinnochio..and easy write for me, the guy is doing life without parole in a federal pen for smuggling a ton of cocaine, pretty well tells the story..thanks Danny

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2010 6:01:00 AM

Yes pain makes everything else unbearable and anxious too.. hope u have something u can take to alleviate the intense pain as it shows so deeply in your poetry today.. feel better..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Lynette Chachere

Date: 3/29/2010 10:09:00 PM

. . .you do well with this picture.we totally got a glimpse of you in pain after that accident.aww, poor Mrs.Kendrick.i hope you got some rest today.you seem like you really need some.at least your arm is still in it's socket covered by skin. -Always&Forever Lynette

Colleen Bono

Date: 3/29/2010 9:29:00 PM

Yep got the picture.sounds pain full.I got a couple new poems posted if you care to read them.Hope you are doing well.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/29/2010 3:17:00 PM

You poor, dear. I hope you find relief soon ... it is a quite graphic write, and clearly was not deterred by the pain. Keep on singing. One love

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/29/2010 12:46:00 PM

sorry mom, I have some pills that will cure or kill ya. LOL

Susan Palli

Date: 3/29/2010 10:35:00 AM

How terrible.