Pain

I'm here,
sitting all alone
with cigarette stubs 
and whiskey bottles
hoping to let go 
of my pain through
the crevices of the scar
you left me with.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 11:43 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Bangalee Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 9:37 PM
Pain! Oh!In agony drain! Let the heart make rain! rain- cats and dogs; to rub out villein //// lovely poetic expression
Krutsinger Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 7:22 AM
Beautiful and heartfelt, Athirstaa. Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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