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Pain

I'm here, sitting all alone with cigarette stubs and whiskey bottles hoping to let go of my pain through the crevices of the scar you left me with.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/20/2024 11:43:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/13/2018 9:37:00 PM
Pain! Oh!In agony drain! Let the heart make rain! rain- cats and dogs; to rub out villein //// lovely poetic expression
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Date: 10/27/2018 7:22:00 AM
Beautiful and heartfelt, Athirstaa. Welcome to Poetry Soup!
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