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Some folks found it hard                   Page 3
Unable to believe
But after much debate
The crowd began to cleave 

They turned in the direction
Of the town, they now were sure
Had a hundred wells just brimming 
With fresh water that was pure

They walk for days unending
Through sand and dust galore
Until the reached the town
Nestled on a canyon floor

Some then posed the question
"What if they don't want to share"
That fearsome doubt persisted
And began to fill the air


"If they won't give us water
Then we'll be force to fight"
Let's get ready to attack
And make them do what's right"

Just 2 more pages.......I promise
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Harrell Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Lol, onward
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 8:35 AM
Only 2 more....this is epic...love all three so far :)...I grew up watching movies like this with my dad....cheers
Curtis Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:24 PM
Thank you Tim, you have a kind and giving heart.
Nance Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 7:47 AM
:) page 3 great continuation, you could on and on for a while with this, I love the storyline poems...can't wait for more !
Curtis Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:24 PM
Thank you very much Casarah, this character and story comes so natural to me, I just have to let it out. I'm just thrilled someone cares to hear it.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:40 AM
Great thoughtful write Jerry ! Glad I read this ,, thnx for sharing!
Curtis Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:26 PM
Thank you Doc, I really appreciate your comments and the time you take to read my work.
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