Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Paddywhack

noiseless hate and rage
harmful duets are performed. 
who will explode first?

what a horror show
in the untamed universe
knives should be jagged

sycophantic pecks 
sacrifice burgundy tongue 
for vehement eyes 

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Speaks Volumes July 20, 2023 at 1:56 AM Dark cannot drive out darkness only light can do that.. Hate cannot drive our hate, only love can do that.. Your poem is amazing.

Demetrios Trifiatis December 4, 2022 at 8:07 AM Hate's madness that could annihilate the entire world. So eloquently written, my friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!

Vijay Pandit December 4, 2022 at 5:29 AM Hate and rage--ultimately explodes as you expertly convey my friend.