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Pact

The Pact! True love intact headstone unravels all, their land infertile took them both. Invoked. © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Date: 5/14/2012 10:21:00 AM
Truely engrossing!! I will have to fav this one!! I do like it very much! deeply touching...speaks volumes...so many things...big hugs, love ya deb...Well Done again!!
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Date: 5/12/2012 9:29:00 PM
Few words showing so much with this poem. thanks for your comment. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/11/2012 10:22:00 AM
pretty good son, thank you for your comment on my works, I see that you have a flair all your own, going to be a great summer on the soup. God bless
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:07:00 PM
it's sad how the land took them. It reminds me of people with very hard lives!!You "packed" a lot into Pact.
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Date: 5/10/2012 5:48:00 PM
Harry cool job on this one, takes a special bred to read "The Shift". Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/10/2012 4:05:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this eve..Sets my thoughts to wondering...When one reads another's poem and there are questions then that is a good work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you stopping by..Sara
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Date: 5/10/2012 1:25:00 PM
Few words Harry, but so excellent done. - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/10/2012 11:06:00 AM
All the best harry, there's a lot in this for five lines xx
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:52:00 AM
Very good Cinquin by you Harry.Nice approach to the theme of the contest.
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:50:00 AM
This 'Cinquain' is true to its form dear poet ! And the message surely stands out ! Wonderful Harry ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:21:00 AM
Harry this is one cool write , good luck..David
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