Pact

The Pact!
True love intact
headstone unravels all,
their land infertile took them both.
Invoked.

© Harry J Horsman  2012

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Deborah Burch

May 14, 2012 at 10:21 AM

Truely engrossing!! I will have to fav this one!! I do like it very much! deeply touching...speaks volumes...so many things...big hugs, love ya deb...Well Done again!!

Phyllis Babcock

May 12, 2012 at 9:29 PM

Few words showing so much with this poem. thanks for your comment. God Bless Phyl

Robert Ball

May 11, 2012 at 10:22 AM

pretty good son, thank you for your comment on my works, I see that you have a flair all your own, going to be a great summer on the soup. God bless

Andrea Dietrich

May 10, 2012 at 10:07 PM

it's sad how the land took them. It reminds me of people with very hard lives!!You "packed" a lot into Pact.

John Freeman

May 10, 2012 at 5:48 PM

Harry cool job on this one, takes a special bred to read "The Shift". Smile. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick

May 10, 2012 at 4:05 PM

Enjoyed reading this eve..Sets my thoughts to wondering...When one reads another's poem and there are questions then that is a good work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you stopping by..Sara