Pack It In

Pack it in





As emotions rush,
tears of anguish will flood,
Until you pack it in aces,
of yesterday's ecstatic moments.






Written Dec 19th, 2015
© Dr. Upma A. Sharma
For "Something with great impact- poetry contest"
Words -18
Sponsor- Nette Onclaud 

Awarded 6th place win
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 7:33 AM
when the rains fall, they will feel so warm even in cold if they are poured through your lines. You are superb, fantastic and just wow! Its nice I visited this page. Compliments of the season dear poet!
Callus Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Tears have the ability to heal broken hearts, Upma. ~ Congratulations on this deserved win. ~ May I wish you a joyous and blessed Christmas, and all the best for 2016. ~ Regards // paul
Gibson Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations, Upma, on your placement.
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:03 AM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your win. SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 6:19 AM
good one, dr upma... warm congrats and thanks for being part of my contest... huggs
Tor Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 5:46 AM
Nice win Dr, Sharma full of emotion!
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