Pacific Breeze

A quiet reverence prevails 
as prayers are whispered over the sea
where great seabirds take flight
and sails caress the Pacific breeze. 

Ever alert to ocean’s moods
we navigate throughout the day 
sea swells heave from deep to deep
tides and currents have their way. 

A sudden gust of wind creates a thrill
we tack along the Northwest line
the ocean guides with wings that glide
along longitudinal paths sublime. 

Wonder reigns as whitecaps spray
across our bow, a brisk baptism
a spiritual revival of refreshment
aware of life the sea has given. 

Few venture the Pacific, close hull
wrangling ocean’s might with mere sails
seafarer’s saltwater dreams soar 
over the sea and ocean trails.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Congratulations on your winner in this contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading your work. I learned something new today from your work. Sara K
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December 6, 2025 at 9:47 AM
Thank you for stopping by to comment, Sara! Glad you liked this. :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Aha I found it! Congratulations, dear
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December 4, 2025 at 8:33 AM
Thank you! :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:28 AM
What a beautiful unique take on the ocean contest. Gosh, I hope it got a win. Let me go see
Leiser Avatar
December 4, 2025 at 8:32 AM
Thanks for commenting, Andrea. You are a great encourager! :)
Somadas Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 10:04 PM
your poem beautifully captures the majesty and mystery of the Pacific Ocean.. Good luck in the contest, Laura..
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November 18, 2025 at 10:15 PM
Thank you, Jenish! I appreciate your kind comments and am glad you enjoyed this! :)
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