Oysters

Open orifice.
Yield yourself.
Sensually salty.
Tasty treat.
Erogenous events.
Rapidly realising
Sexual satisfaction.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mark Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 12:40 AM
Very sensual Metaphore , the acquired taste of a maturing oyster ...well done
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 8:04 PM
I don't like them, but I LIKE this poem.
Murray Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Turner Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 5:12 PM
A woman after my own heart...I used to go to Bourbon Street in New Orleans and have my fill,,,..of oysters that is! Peace my dear:)
Murray Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 6:13 PM
They are a special treat, aren't they Daniel.?
Smith Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Yummy too. Good job! Charlie
Smith Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 8:24 PM
That's actually an old painting and not my picture. But I love to eat fish...
Murray Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:46 PM
I love that word "Yummy". You're a seasoned fisherman by the look of you Charlie, so will will know what I am on about. Thank you for dropping your hook, line and sinker here for a moment.
Fleming Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 2:40 PM
I will go with all of this, Jean. An oyster...very well summed up in seven compact and salty little lines - Nicely condensed! My very best regards, Jean! :) john
Murray Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:43 PM
It's fabled....see??
Murray Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:42 PM
Thank you John. They remind me of so much apart from their fabeled powers. My Dad for one, but mostly just the sensation of being underwater, as they slide past the uvula. God, that spelt wrong could get me into bother....
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