Oysters

Open orifice. Yield yourself. Sensually salty. Tasty treat. Erogenous events. Rapidly realising Sexual satisfaction.

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Anthony Mark

Date: 4/2/2016 12:40:00 AM

Very sensual Metaphore , the acquired taste of a maturing oyster ...well done

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2016 8:04:00 PM

I don't like them, but I LIKE this poem.

Jean Murray
Date: 3/6/2016 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/5/2016 5:12:00 PM

A woman after my own heart...I used to go to Bourbon Street in New Orleans and have my fill,,,..of oysters that is! Peace my dear:)

Jean Murray
Date: 3/5/2016 6:13:00 PM

They are a special treat, aren't they Daniel.?

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/5/2016 3:58:00 PM

Yummy too. Good job! Charlie

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/5/2016 8:24:00 PM

That's actually an old painting and not my picture. But I love to eat fish...

Jean Murray
Date: 3/5/2016 4:46:00 PM

I love that word "Yummy". You're a seasoned fisherman by the look of you Charlie, so will will know what I am on about. Thank you for dropping your hook, line and sinker here for a moment.

John Fleming

Date: 3/5/2016 2:40:00 PM

I will go with all of this, Jean. An oyster...very well summed up in seven compact and salty little lines - Nicely condensed! My very best regards, Jean! :) john

Jean Murray
Date: 3/5/2016 4:43:00 PM

It's fabled....see??

Jean Murray
Date: 3/5/2016 4:42:00 PM

Thank you John. They remind me of so much apart from their fabeled powers. My Dad for one, but mostly just the sensation of being underwater, as they slide past the uvula. God, that spelt wrong could get me into bother....