Oyster Roast

The clumps are placed atop the grate
And fire is lit below.
Soon steam will form in empty space.
The process seems too slow.
While tender morsels slowly roast
The beer and coke flows free.
Camaraderie is displaced,
when open shells you see. 

common ballad
alternating between Iambic Tetrameter and Iambic Trimeter
only line 2 and 4 have to Rhyme in each 4 lines.

© Oct 10 Charles Henderson
For Brian's "up to 10 lines" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Henderson Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Makes me want to go out and buy some oysters...
Onclaud Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 8:56 PM
can have some, i must insist!!.. clsssic...huggs, charles!
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2011 at 12:18 PM
YUP YUP now go do one for my Contest and yes I'm nagging! ;) Light & Love [ohhhhhhh ps your input IS needed again on the haiku blog]
Smith Avatar
October 10, 2011 at 10:14 PM
Love those oysters. Delightful depiction.
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