Oxy, You Moron

going
slower
then slow

i cross bred
a snail with
a sloth and

so 
taking two 
to make one

the 
sum total
outcome

is
rush
hour
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Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Cute, a traffic stopper for sure.
Connelly Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:52 PM
Thank you Richard. My first day of working a morning shift. I thought ahead poetically.
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 3:19 AM
the title is hilarious and the poem sheer genius!:-) hugs jan xx
Connelly Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Thank you Jan, but I ain't no rocket scientist.
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