Owl

Watching with wise eyes, 
Gliding through the air of night, 
There goes its prey... Hoot!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Phillips Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 4:24 PM
I like the last line it is very captivating. Nice work of art
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 11:44 PM
a cute little creation, Hanna. Congrats for your win.
Potter Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Thankyou!
Ryerson Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Love the alliteration in the first line...The second line has great flow and is wonderfully descriptive and the last line gave me a little chuckle!...Congratulations Hanna - Tim
Potter Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Thanks!
Kendrick Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Uniquely creative winning work..Congrats on your placement..Sara
Potter Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Thanx!
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 12:50 PM
Very creative haiku... congratulations
Potter Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Thankyou!
Poet Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 11:57 AM
Good one Hanna.Congrats on your win.
Potter Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Thanks!
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 6:46 AM
Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Potter Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Thanks alot!
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:12 AM
- A winning haiku, with great quality Hanna !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Potter Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 4:27 PM
Thank you!
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July 21, 2013 at 8:12 PM
Hanna :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA**
Potter Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 4:28 PM
Thanks! and I will have to check that out! :)
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 11:06 AM
- Wise eyes, nice haiku Hanna! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Potter Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 4:27 PM
I edited to that! thanks for the suggestion!
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