'owed' To Ourselves...

Seriously, I've been thinking about this
whole genesis thing and there's that part
the one just before the start
that says something kind of sad...

It said that God was alone before they had
the idea to create Us and I was glad
to see that such a Verse was written.

This is the part of God I can see as Human.
Admittedly I've not read the book
but I did read that page and look
we all have our understanding
and we read just what we need. Right?

And I did in deed, over and again
see how sad this God had been
alone before there was even a When.

... Can you imagine?

What might have been seen
in the face of the waters Then
and in the greatest effort of Love
Imagination was created Above
because before We could be...?
I'm guessing...
God had to reach inside to see
Just and exactly, what and how
precious We, had to be.


Genesis 

"Mirror Mirror is the Ball...."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/1/2009 3:34:00 PM
we are all, already stars...we just haven't realised it yet, everyone on earth is already a star, a member of the seamlessness, the one that created the two, then the two to the three or holy trinity, being harmonious obviously bored us, a more dangerous choosing ground was needed, somewhere to polarise one way or the other, our world is made to drag us out rather than seek refuge within, it would kill the economy if we all looked in. hehe. much love Izzy
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Date: 10/31/2009 5:33:00 AM
Lovely poem, as we are in his image, we are his creators, thank you for your lovely comments, but tell me, what is corona ? love Simone
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Date: 10/26/2009 6:59:00 AM
A very thought-provoking and well written poem, Izzy! Excellent thoughts on the Biblical content. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2009 3:35:00 AM
In the beginning there was God the Father, The Son, and The Holy Ghost. Because if you keep reading it says we. Then in the book of John. It says "in the beginning was the Word and The Word was with God and The Word came and dwell among men and without this wasn't anything made that was made. But God did want to make man and have a relationship with him. You have made some good points. Keep writing. Sara
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