Overwhelmed

Despite having thoughts and words enter my mind, the mind bus was full up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
October 22, 2023 at 5:07 PM
Dear Mark, your awesome imagery describes your chosen word "overwhelmed" with creative poetic finesse. Congratulations for your excellent win in Silent One's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 12:24 PM
I did overwhelmed too and we both got third place. Bummer. I really like yours.
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October 19, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your placement.
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