David Kavanagh Poet Monoku

Overwhelmed

monsoon rains a sight for sore eyes reminds me of you ~ the floods came too

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24/07/21
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Brian Sambourne September 12, 2021 at 2:31 PM I like the juxtaposition of rain + recollection as you veer towards the destructiveness of floods. Well written, David. Congratulations! Brian David Kavanagh September 12, 2021 at 2:51 PM Thank you Brian, perhaps a reflection we all get from time to time, when fondly remembering loved ones, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty July 27, 2021 at 12:40 PM Sore eye's Floods of tears David Kavanagh July 27, 2021 at 12:56 PM Perhaps remembering a tragic moment, cheers David

Kai Michael Neumann July 27, 2021 at 6:59 AM Wonderful ... David Kavanagh July 27, 2021 at 8:40 AM Thank you Kai,

Gary Radice July 26, 2021 at 2:56 AM Sadness rains down in your words from beginning to end. The floods of tears had me wanting to know more. A whirlwind romance? Am I off course? Cheers - Gary David Kavanagh July 26, 2021 at 4:14 AM No your pretty well on course Gary, I’d say probably a relationship one that ended in tragedy, all these floods around the world inspired me to draw a parallel, cheers David

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart July 24, 2021 at 10:05 AM Potent! I felt that. xomo David Kavanagh July 25, 2021 at 1:36 AM Thank you super Mo, A time to remember and probably forget, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2021 at 9:28 AM Wow!! David Kavanagh July 25, 2021 at 1:38 AM So many floods on the news recently, so many deaths, cheers David