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Overwhelmed

monsoon rains a sight for sore eyes reminds me of you ~ the floods came too Bite Size Poem no14 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier | 24/07/21 Monoku syllable counter ps (17)

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 9/12/2021 2:31:00 PM

I like the juxtaposition of rain + recollection as you veer towards the destructiveness of floods. Well written, David. Congratulations! Brian

David Kavanagh
Date: 9/12/2021 2:51:00 PM

Thank you Brian, perhaps a reflection we all get from time to time, when fondly remembering loved ones, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/27/2021 12:40:00 PM

Sore eye's Floods of tears

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/27/2021 12:56:00 PM

Perhaps remembering a tragic moment, cheers David

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/27/2021 6:59:00 AM

Wonderful ...

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/27/2021 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Kai,

Gary Radice

Date: 7/26/2021 2:56:00 AM

Sadness rains down in your words from beginning to end. The floods of tears had me wanting to know more. A whirlwind romance? Am I off course? Cheers - Gary

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/26/2021 4:14:00 AM

No your pretty well on course Gary, I’d say probably a relationship one that ended in tragedy, all these floods around the world inspired me to draw a parallel, cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/24/2021 10:05:00 AM

Potent! I felt that. xomo

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/25/2021 1:36:00 AM

Thank you super Mo, A time to remember and probably forget, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2021 9:28:00 AM

Wow!!

David Kavanagh
Date: 7/25/2021 1:38:00 AM

So many floods on the news recently, so many deaths, cheers David