overnight growth

while I slept, dandelions play hide and seek
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August 22, 2026 at 8:57 PM
What a delightful monoku, Karen! I absolutely love the playful personification of the dandelions playing "hide and seek" while you slept. It perfectly captures that mischievous, quiet magic of a garden's overnight growth in such a charming and compact way.🌼
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August 23, 2026 at 6:41 AM
we never know what nature is doing!
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August 22, 2026 at 8:13 PM
The only question I have: How would you know what the dandelions are doing while you sleep?! ... While I sleep, my stomach keeps growing. Gawd! ~ gw
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August 23, 2026 at 6:42 AM
I sleep with one eye open! Have a great day Gershon!
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